What do you think?

Ok so I wrote this like two weeks ago.I like it but hey I'm only one person.
What do you think?
please commet even if you don't like it I want to know.


As easy as falling
The Beginning of The End
January/25/2009
9:59 P.M
She stood on the bridge. It was raining sheets of water,wind blowing though her black hair.
Its now or never, she thought. She had tried to do this before but her parents had stopped her, they had said it wasn't worth it.
They are wrong, she thought. She toke a step closer to the edge .They don't know whats happened. And they didn't. She had kept it all a secret. Everything, the people fallowing her to the things she did. She was not proud of them. She could get out of this easy. All she needed to do was fall. As easy as falling. It would only take a second. And who knows? It might not even hurt.
The wind blew. The rain beat her face again. She shivered. She looked down. The water was roaring and instead of the the normal blue water it was black. The sky was black too .
For the last two days it had been raining. Pouring actually.
“Its been taken after my mood,” she said out loud. Two days ago... the worst had happened two days ago. Her boyfriend, Jake, had died. And she had seen it all. I could have stopped it,she thought ,I knew what was happening.
A tear ran down her cheek,as she thought of him. She angrily wiped it away. Jake, would want her to be strong.
Strong... what a word . She thought for a second. A quote came to her mind.“It is easy to die, it's hard to live.” It fit, she was trying to commit suicide.
So did that mean she was taking the easy way out?
She was.
He would not want me to do this, She thought.
She turned around and took one step. Someone she knew was walking towards her, gonna take her home.
But as he got closer... the bad man.
“Die,” said the man and he pushed her off the bridge.
Her life flashed before her eyes...

If you try to copy write I have proff i wrote this before you had it so ,don't try.
P.S. Who knows were the quote is from?